вторник, 13 ноября 2012 г.

Individual Reading. "The Hunt for Red October"

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  1. Part 1
    Good!
    Slips:
    ... a complicated relationship with THE Soviet WAY OF life
    He studies the Red October WHILE IT IS built ... that they ARE TO silently move to Cuba
    ... detected by THE US submarine “Bremerton”
    ... (no 'a')CIA analyst Jack Ryan ...
    etc

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  2. PART 2
    Excellent!
    Slips:
    … THE new secret mission under the code name “MANDOLIN” begins…
    … to inform (no ‘the’) commander Painter …
    THE headquarters gives (or give) …

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  3. PART 3
    Very good!
    Slips:

    Later the doctors find THE TRACES OF the radiation exposure and see some improvement in the sailor’S condition.
    … the doctors start to suspect THAT the USSR INTENDS to kill the patient.
    MEANWHILE, THE old submarine, “the Ethan Allen”
    etc

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  4. Part IV
    Excellent!
    Slips^

    As a result, Jack Ryan and THE British officer, Owen Williams (who knows Russian) …
    … that the ship is damaged and must be ABANDONED …
    … VISITS the submarine … with (no ‘a’) medical help.

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  5. PART 5
    Excellent!
    Slips:
    However, the Soviet submarine “the Konovalov”, COMMANDED by Captain Viktor Tupolev, RAMIUS’ former student …
    … to the CIA safe house to start their new LIVES …

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