Part 1 Good! Slips: ... a complicated relationship with THE Soviet WAY OF life He studies the Red October WHILE IT IS built ... that they ARE TO silently move to Cuba ... detected by THE US submarine “Bremerton” ... (no 'a')CIA analyst Jack Ryan ... etc
PART 2 Excellent! Slips: … THE new secret mission under the code name “MANDOLIN” begins… … to inform (no ‘the’) commander Painter … THE headquarters gives (or give) …
Later the doctors find THE TRACES OF the radiation exposure and see some improvement in the sailor’S condition. … the doctors start to suspect THAT the USSR INTENDS to kill the patient. MEANWHILE, THE old submarine, “the Ethan Allen” etc
As a result, Jack Ryan and THE British officer, Owen Williams (who knows Russian) … … that the ship is damaged and must be ABANDONED … … VISITS the submarine … with (no ‘a’) medical help.
PART 5 Excellent! Slips: However, the Soviet submarine “the Konovalov”, COMMANDED by Captain Viktor Tupolev, RAMIUS’ former student … … to the CIA safe house to start their new LIVES …
Part 1
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Slips:
... a complicated relationship with THE Soviet WAY OF life
He studies the Red October WHILE IT IS built ... that they ARE TO silently move to Cuba
... detected by THE US submarine “Bremerton”
... (no 'a')CIA analyst Jack Ryan ...
etc
PART 2
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Slips:
… THE new secret mission under the code name “MANDOLIN” begins…
… to inform (no ‘the’) commander Painter …
THE headquarters gives (or give) …
PART 3
ОтветитьУдалитьVery good!
Slips:
Later the doctors find THE TRACES OF the radiation exposure and see some improvement in the sailor’S condition.
… the doctors start to suspect THAT the USSR INTENDS to kill the patient.
MEANWHILE, THE old submarine, “the Ethan Allen”
etc
Part IV
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Slips^
As a result, Jack Ryan and THE British officer, Owen Williams (who knows Russian) …
… that the ship is damaged and must be ABANDONED …
… VISITS the submarine … with (no ‘a’) medical help.
PART 5
ОтветитьУдалитьExcellent!
Slips:
However, the Soviet submarine “the Konovalov”, COMMANDED by Captain Viktor Tupolev, RAMIUS’ former student …
… to the CIA safe house to start their new LIVES …